I'm just registering that when a noise to the left heralds the arrival of the backpack's owner, who then sits down, with a whump
, in the seat NEXT TO ME.
So perhaps that "whump
" was her way of telling me that I had sat down in HIS seat and her distress was too visceral to articulate.
"So me and Bevs (Stuart Beavon) are together and he's defending -- with me on the keeper -- when the ball's been whipped in andJordan Willisof all people runs in and WHUMP
He's killed a distemper-ravaged dog with one blow of a thick tree branch and a full grown steer by setting the barrel of a shotgun just above its eyes and pulling the trigger, whump
. A human would be about midway between these but there would be a password that accessed the bomb codes to repeat to the captain as well.
A thudding "whump
" that can be felt through your feet makes you glad your positioning estimations were correct.
, as we bottom out, and climb back up to the cloud ceiling.
Suddenly a friend phoned to say they were packing up and I looked again and it just went up - whump
. I grabbed our passports and I ran out."
It is the job of the author to maintain that world, to hold the reader suspended throughout the entire book, and to prevent him or her from falling out of the fictional world with an ungraceful "whump
At the shot we could hear the solid whump
of the .270 bullet, but he kept on running, disappearing over the next rise.
Just then, the Malian butcher raised his ax and brought it down with a whump
to hack off a hunk of beef.
I thrill to the skirl of the bagpipes and the whump
of the big bass drums.
During the next fireworks display, listen for the source of "the bombs bursting in air," the muted Whump